Saylee Bhogle

advisor

Illinois Institute of Technology, College of Architecture

United States of America

My architectural focus lies at the intersection of sustainability, social equity, and experiential… more

The “Breathing Pavilion” is a strong urban intervention that creates a meaningful public space within a small footprint. The vertical design gives the pavilion a clear identity and allows users to experience the city from different heights and viewpoints. The concept of pause, observation, and connection with the surroundings is communicated clearly throughout the project.

The use of voids, jaali screens, and climbing plants adds both environmental and visual value to the design. The pavilion responds well to the local climate through natural ventilation, shading, and passive cooling strategies. The project also stands out for using simple and affordable materials while still achieving an attractive architectural expression.

Another positive aspect is the openness of the pavilion. The space feels welcoming, accessible, and socially engaging rather than functioning only as a visual object.

- While the pavilion creates an engaging spatial experience, the proposal could benefit from a more detailed exploration of structural stability, especially considering the vertical proportions and lightweight screening elements. Additional information regarding load distribution, user capacity, and weather resistance would strengthen the technical credibility of the design.

- The circulation strategy is conceptually interesting, but the accessibility of upper levels could be further considered to ensure inclusivity for users with different physical abilities. Introducing alternative access solutions or integrating universal design principles would make the pavilion more socially responsive.

- The environmental strategy is promising, particularly through passive cooling and vegetation; however, the proposal could further explain the maintenance and long-term performance of the climbing plants within an urban setting. Clarifying irrigation methods, material durability, and seasonal adaptability would enhance the sustainability narrative.

- Finally, while the pavilion functions well as an observational and social element, the project could further explore how it activates the surrounding public realm at ground level through programming, seating diversity, or temporary community activities. Strengthening this relationship could increase its impact as a true urban catalyst rather than solely a sculptural intervention.
17.05.2026

Dear Saylee Bhogle,
Thank you for your positive feedback and valuable suggestions. I will further work on the improvements you shared, including structural details, accessibility, environmental strategy, maintenance, and the ground level experience.

Thanks again for your guidance.