Neha Dalvi
student
School of Environment and Architecture
India
Architecture
What is the most important spaces of affordable housing are not its rooms but the infrastructures that connect them? Contemporary housing continues to… more
Yi Wang
advisor
Washington University in St. Louis
United States of America
Yi Wang is a licensed architect based in New York and the founder of Yione Studio, an award-winning… more
The project tackles an astute social issue with a brilliant solution. I love how you observe the city like an urban planner, target the problem as a civil engineer and cut into the problem like a landscape architect. The attitude behind the work deserves even praises: humble, practical, and creative. Thus, I don’t have much to say about the project itself. My note below are mainly about the representation.
Given how much effort you’ve put into it, I would encourage you to rethink how architectural graphic convention can help you to communicate with your audience. Try to balance creativity with readability. For example, the masterplan on page 2 has south facing up with no compass to indicate this. Page 1 and 2 are also missing a legend for different water pipe colors.
On page 3, rethink the media you’ve chosen for each drawing. Why render the axo in CAD but hand draw the plans? It might make more sense to do the reverse: CAD drawings are measurable, which suits a plan; and hand-drawn the axo can convey a livelier sense of the living scenario, and save your a good deal of drafting time in the process.
Page 4 is a comprehensive, detailed plan, but the color palette feels better suited to a compost bin layout plan than to a full site plan.
Page 4-6, since they center on the compost garden, the core of your design, they deserves a closer look at landscape representation. The section can become far more compelling with a colored garden rendering.
This is a valuable topic with real potentials to move forward. If I were you, I’d start seeking supports from government agencies or academic partners to help make it real. I looking forward to seeing it realized someday.
19.07.2026