Revive

Hi Afina, despite this is not my architectural tendency, so let's make this feedback as simple as possible I want just to appreciate the good things and make some proposition to enrich the project No Nobody on Earth have the perfect idea we are just doing our best to inspire either. *I find the idea of the historical entrance is very original especially the formal research of the statue despite many architects in similar projects preferring that historical monument be in the middle of the project like the main event cause this type of project is difficult to guess all scenario to predict which route will be the principal entrance *Having such a great model gives you the chance to search perspectival lectures and visualize better the fragment so I cherish that. *more analyses of annex street etudes des flux merchants will give us more helpful information that affects our composition choices *Proposal: integrate the concept of building with the society, involving a primary school or local association of the city for example (permaculture), especially in the neighborhood of vertical habitat (or the plantation has a lot of limits) *With the commitment to permaculture the project becomes productive you guarantee liveliness +What I like: The morphology of the path (Especially the composition ) seems very fluid and the good organic and intelligent choices. *more information about the vast road annex (some simple icons like you did above, high way ... etc.) +what i like: I congratulate you graphically you had all the elements that allowed us to imagine the project, especially the model *Proposition: In terms of composition path morphology you can take a look at Fabio Alessandro Fusco's ideograms(30 Architects book, pages 22,23)and on his website, there is a whole section of his ideograms) tto have some organique forme *agreement: the ideogram is an active text and superadded writing allows for a network of intangible relationships between the folds of the territorial palimpsest and it makes possible the potential transformation of the urban fragment.... *proposition: get the opinion of a landscape architect to make the right choice of vegetation that serves your concept and trust me the permaculture design at the facade level will give eye movement and a more natural and original visual experience +proposition: get a reference about permaculture space and Morris's book will give much more information. +Keep it up Denipro needs people like you if not today, tomorrow.