Architecture Design "pavilion"

Dear Somaya, Before everything, congratulations on participating in the Inspireli Awards! It’s already a big step to bravely share your design and learn from feedback. About your project, I’d like to focus on three main points: 1- Project Definition: Defining the needs and users is the first step toward a good project. In your case, it would have been better to clearly describe what the pavilion is about and explain the context before getting into details. 2- Cohesion in Storytelling: You mentioned interpreting a Möbius strip and representing infinity, but the reason behind this choice is missing. Structuring your story step-by-step — starting with the needs, then moving toward the concept — would make it easier to understand and follow. 3- Technical Drawings and Diagrams: Architecture mainly communicates through drawings. While your renderings are nice (congratulations on that!), diagrams, plans, sections, and elevations are even more important to properly express your ideas. Try to focus more on these and avoid unnecessary perspective views. I wish you a great journey ahead in architecture. Best regards, Omid